Thursday, July 28, 2016

Elegy Unintended To Write Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hidden in the clue, came along with return mail
So fearful and loathsome, in ghostly shadow
Now, how can I make my mind to write an elegy
Very next moment I sent you birthday greetings?
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 August 2016

Hidden in the clue! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you Edward.

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Valsa George 14 August 2016

Separation and sorrow come into our life unexpected and uninvited.....! But we have to bear them with fortitude! A poignant write!

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Thank you Valsa, one of my most valued critiques, for your views.

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Christopher Tye 02 August 2016

Wonderful and poignant poem, a loss of a good friend can leave us heartbroken for a long-time.

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Thank you, though late for your sensational comment.

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M Asim Nehal 01 August 2016

Heartfelt, Life and death is beyond our control, we are puppets controlled by our fate, your friend is lucky to have you by his side, May God accept all his good deeds and reward suitably. Nice poem.10++

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Thank you Asim, for you sentiments and the comment.

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Pamela Sinicrope 30 July 2016

Yes, very thoughtful and kind. Sorry for the loss of your friend.

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Thank you Pam, although late for the comment.

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Kelly Kurt 28 July 2016

So very thoughtful, Jayatissa. You are a good man

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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