Monday, September 8, 2008

[[elegy Of A Ventilator]]* Comments

Rating: 5.0

Led eyes to the shades of spring
In the hues of autumn
Taught such geometry to chin
that my eyes never rolled wantonly
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Rehan Hyder
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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 12 September 2008

............10.............

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 12 September 2008

heart rending...! ...beautiful tribute to a love kept alive thru sheer belief in itself...marvellous!

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Reshma Ramesh 11 September 2008

oh wow! ! i got carried away......well worded..great

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Emancipation Planz 11 September 2008

Rehan, a thoughtful eloquent tribute to these lovers and the capacity within them to honour trials and tribulations... you have breathed awareness and gift it to us.. through this ventilator.... Jani..

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Viola Grey 09 September 2008

this is full of heart...love this line: 'loaded with 18 years of candles and cakes; '....great piece

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Indira Babbellapati 08 September 2008

resurrection of human faith and love...

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Waqas Naeem 08 September 2008

a beautiful story of love....heart warming...and the reality of it just even more impressive and appreciable... for what might you do to stop true love? say death, and I would prove you wrong!

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