Elegy: A Dead Public Pond Comments

Absolutely brilliant, Dillip!

This is a beautiful, heartfelt personification poem, a tale of nature and change.

This is an absolute gem.......thank u, sir....

thank you very much for writing this and sharing it--you have certainly touched the minds of poets here on PH

5 stars---what a reverse, seeing life from the pond's view! ! ! I think we should all try writing a poem from a piece of nature's point of view---maybe we will be kinder to the planet then

"The heavy rain surged into her pool"…and now down the drain so playfooly!