Elegiac Earthquake Comments

Ameen bro, my prayers are with you too with my tears....it is a powerful write indeed with hidden message, thanks for sharing your tears with us bro and God Bless You.... rgds asif

Sitting on hot seat and writing about real tragedy indeed need great will and courage! Life is a great circus there!

A very touching narrative Ahmad...the powerful and sincere prayer is a perfect ending to this poem - thanks for sharing it

A GREAT TRIBUTE TO THE VICTIMS OF THE EARTHQUAKE, ENDING WITH A FERVENT PRAYER TO GOD! THANKS FOR SHARING! -Raj

The Devil shook his great big fat tummy which felled all other poor souls... The devil laughed as shook. Those many lives, that he took... Come, now, espye and look. Look at all the torcher... In Satin's book. The suffering of all sad faces... In the country, of all, the races. Can you, now weep, for the dead and gone? ... Can we smile once more, before the next dawn? Not likely, in this age... Cannot you, or I, feel all the rage? Happiness-no more... The people are sad and sore. Weep a final tear... For something, else, we might not fear. Your poem got a moving ten from me.

Well written narrative poem, touching...........10++++++++

a very touching write and presented well in verses....a sad thing that happened to those innocent people...my prayers to them and to your country with this disastrous calamity.

My thoughts and prayers are with all those who have suffered, you have a good heart Ahmad, 10 Lynda xx

I read it 3 times... your poem melted my Heart, I had tears... it's evident this masterpiece was penned sincerely and devotedly, with much love and much care... you succeeded in shaking and quaking my neurons... when the way is for the Natural Disasters we has no thing to do just down on knees and rise our hands. may GOD send His Mercy and Compassion May THE LORD bless you Ahmad I clapped for your masterwork... 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Let all those who live on Gods earth remember that it´s he who gives and takes us what we are use to call ours. Would we share the wealth bestowed upon us the earth would recipocate whit a benevolent embrace. For she is our mother that cares for us even though we´ve neglected her. May angels soothe all those affected, Boomwisperer Ruerd

finely penned the touchy fact! God knows all! we pray! He would help us! Ameen! 10+

it is a sad day for everyone when others suffer.....i join everyone with their hopes and prayers....

it's such a nice poem telling about disaster in our beloved country. your way in describing about the earthquake was really touching me. Thanks for sharing

if we could take all the pain from all the hearts we could build a temple in their honor and their families. GOD BLESS ALL THAT HAVE DIED AND THEIR FAMILIES.

Your poem is an elegy actually. The earthquake has created it.... God disposes....To all the lost souls: RIP. Subroto

Kindly add my deeply condolence to the victims and pray to the souls, the earth is prepared all measures to live us, that is her utros but we try to dig her stomach there were too hot but who cares, thousands of years in rotation a very little variations are occured that is the answer, but according to us seconds are too terrible we are experienced too much and prediction is beyondu us, pray with vigilant eyes.

very well-developed flow of words and feelings with a sincere and true message to humankind! 10++

Words come out from the depth of heart in sympathy for the quake victims and an emphatic outcry against human folly in ravaging Nature. A pathetic appeal. I join you in this hour of gloom and the appeal. CP

you are rigth we must take care of our action one day we are her not the next....beautiful expressed, remarkable poem this oune, good thing to remember the victims some day it may be one of us....

Thoughtful of you to remember these many victims. So much tragedy and suffering. They certainly need all the help they can get, but, alas it is disheartening to know that many will never be helped.