Wednesday, May 2, 2007

Elegantly Drowning Comments

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She stands so eleganty,
she stands so pretty,
pretty girl is suffering,
pretty girl is drowning,
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Amanda Swindahl
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I enjoyed this, a very clean, lovely feeling to this.

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Old Amsterdam 14 May 2007

great, i think i should make me better, you know, it's a litter bit hard for me to write a poem in English.

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