Elegant Suicide.... Comments

Really nice. Imaginary

This sadly is a fine poem in measured tormented doses. Glad you are here to write it. Some fantastic imagery and deeply conflicted although seemingly clear thoughts. The little love nuances with the pills is apt and powerful and the very British play on words of Mind the Gap, or train will befall you but mind the cracked as a train may be a soft option, anger and defence the core of a very hot star. And yet the regret and misadventure is balanced with humour and resignation that sadly the main character is in the hapless hands of another and the irony is palpable and somewhat bemusing to someone failing crash and burn. Great write, hang in there, people love you.