Saturday, June 27, 2009

Electroplate Comments

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She electroplated silver
She electroplated gold
Metals covering lies
Truths striving to unfold.
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Mehreen Mujeeb
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Afzal Shauq 28 June 2009

A lie can never be Without a truth behind it well written and these lines are meaningful and innovative approach is seen behind your poem.thats why I being a peace wisher poet say..well done..you are rally a good job...10+++++++++++++++++++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 June 2009

Fine allegorical eloquence! .........10+

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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