Electronic Pain Comments

I really like the concept in this poem. It's so true! Unfortunatly I'm one of those kids and I wish that I could detatch myself from electronics, but I can't. Nice poem.

'As if every thing's melted And they became history Reminiscence them only to reap its joy And be satiated That we didn't lose anything As the new borns are today.' Content of this poem is modern. Last few lines are amazing. As the time flies we are really entering into the zone of electronic pain! Love this poem with 10++