Sunday, March 8, 2009

Electric Poetry Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I could write a poem
to light the mind of men
I’d sing it from the rooftops
In hills and vales and glen
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Wojja Fink
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Original Unknown Girl 29 June 2009

Very lovely poem, lilting tone throughout and a kind of a sing-songy rhythm to it! HG: -) xx

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Shashendra Amalshan 26 May 2009

hey wojja, I m realy begining to enjoy your poems.so coool.. 'If I could write a poem to light the mind of men I’d sing it from the rooftops In hills and vales and glen' well i tell you what each and every one of you poem can light the minds of men...so go and sing now..sing every where...spread your poetic rhythm every where...nice cheers..enjoyed it very much..feels like i wana dance with you lol.. see you soon..i gotta go, my sister is asking for Pc to go to FB, bye

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Delicate Heart 18 May 2009

catchy title, so influential poem as to affect the reader profoundly.

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Subroto Chatterjee 13 April 2009

Oy Wojja, You have the questions....you have the answers...No? See, you asked IF you could write a poem. You just did, didn'ya? And you sung them so beautifully too...Option's yours if you want to sing them to the birds as well. Keep on! Cheers. Subroto

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Sandra Fowler 30 March 2009

This is delightful. A very original mind is at work here.10, of course. Kind regards, Sandra

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Pablo Cruise 21 March 2009

Wojja, Beautiful sentiments! ! Keep singing.

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Christine Kerr 15 March 2009

Nice to see a peom written on just the feeling that your feeling and have it come out so smoothly. Well done Wojja

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Expressed with electrifying eloquence.

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Vic Hood 08 March 2009

The poem is from the poet and for the poet. Write to please yourself and the rest of the world will like it, or not. If they do, lucky them. If they don't, who cares. It's their problem not yours. If you want to write to please the world, advertizing copy is a good place to start. But it's not Poetry and you are a poet. Vic Hood

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