Wednesday, April 30, 2008

Electric Might Comments

Rating: 4.4

Rich jet-black sky,
lightning flashes.
Thunder is nigh,
hear the crashes.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 14 May 2008

You have created a powerful stormy atmosphere in this piece Ernestine. Great write. Love Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 08 May 2008

The sights and sounds of the storm, you paint them well Ernestine, there is much majesty and mayhem combined within the approaching turbulance Love duncan X

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Lynda Robson 30 April 2008

I loved reading this Ernestine, I felt as though I was standing watching the storm with you, great imagery, nature in all its glory,10 Lynda xx

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David Harris 30 April 2008

Ernestine down here in the south I have its rumbling within the rain, but no flashes seen. Fantastic imagery. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

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