Thursday, August 23, 2007

! Electric Haiku Comments

Rating: 3.2

First brown leaves falling,
crisp air now the sun's set,
another light bulb gone.
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Michael Shepherd
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Alison Cassidy 23 August 2007

Now why does this one remind me of Jerry? 'Bloody globes! Always dying at the wrong moment. They do it deliberately! ' love, Allie xxxx

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Ernestine Northover 23 August 2007

Everything has a set lifespan, and temperatures can indeed react and make the bulbs go 'bang'. I suppose it like 'duracell' batteries, some bulbs last longer than others. Great haikus. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Scarlett Treat 23 August 2007

Sitting in the dark... Seeing inside of eyelids... Very strange indeed!

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