I was reminded often
By elders and friends even
Don't choose unknown path
And never dive in deep water for bath
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Some Girl Lovely reflection, nice imagery of train journey and tracks when choosing right direction
Jim Lion8 minutes ago Full of emotion a reflection
Alan Green 'Guppyman'6 minutes ago the poet tells of how they now know why thins are so Comment +2 Exceptional
Larry Stallings4 minutes ago good work Comment +1 a poem of aware
More Post Thank you for sharing! ?ila??a ?a??i??z5 minutes ago Great work, such an interesting poem! I love it! ! Comment +2 self reflection
I was reminded often By elders and friends even Don’t choose unknown path And never dive in deep water for bath
Sabeen Rashid and Lela Northcross Wakely like this. Sabeen Rashid You sound so philosophical in this one. Seems like you are planning to delve into it a bit more and come up with a book on it. No problem there, but I like you the way you are, a die-hard romantic. Loved this poem though. You're right, the road ahead is full of twists and turns. It's how best we keep ourselves conditioned to face them in our stride, with an inner conviction and determination coupled with grace and courage.20 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1