Elderly Old Comments

A wishful thinking, which every poet does in his own way. Timeless journey and stuck between the two worlds. Had this being true we would have remained aimlessly. A thought provoking poem 5**

'The time has no age' - absolutely true!

Yes, man lives in constant fear of death, especially as he grows older. Death is an irrefutable reality! We have to bid good bye to this earth one day or the other.....! This truth is given powerful poetic expression!

Life seen more clearly...amazing.

Changes and challenges! ! ! Life! Birth! ! ! ! Growing old. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I'm young than the time I'm small than the space So how can be old? A nice idea, a wonderful presentation.

A well created poem. Truly exceptional...5 stars*****

Very well captured the death and elderly walk between time and space. Great admirations for this conception and awesome intellectual penning. Thank-you.