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The half-lit wilting and leafless white Birch
against the pink and gray Pinatubo sunset,
their fragile contrast to the skyline like haggard wraiths.
We sit on a cement bench on the shore of the artificial lake
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Great imagery. The rhythm in right tunes to please the reader.....
George...nice imagery leading up to my favorite preoccupation-deception/self-deception; how could we live without it. And if it wasn't for poets like you maybe we wouldn't know the difference. Yeah, you want us to know the difference...good work here.
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7/28/2025 4:28:38 AM # 1.0.0
This word painting would hang in a frame on every heart wall.