Amar dekha sei meyeti
Borshar ek dine
Chata mathai chilo dariye
Bus stop-er ek nirjon kone
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borshar dine ek jholok dekha ekti drisyo.. which turned into a beautiful poem. The ending really makes the reader wonder if she was crying. Great write!
Read translation and it was really good well I am not sure where google did justice to your original poem yet I enjoyed it.10
Thank you Asim.. I would hopefully soon put up an English translation of my own soon :)
choker jol anek somoye bristi er jol er moddhe nijeke hariye fele..... kintu pichu rekhe jaye kichu sriti, kichu anubhuti..... superb writing....