Wednesday, December 30, 2009

Ek Is Lief Vir Jou Comments

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'Ek is lief vir jou'.
Donker, leë woorde, sonder betekenis of gevoel,
In die lug gespreek – te swewe, sonder teiken of doel.
Dit voor jy skielik net iewers in die niet verdwyn,
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Marien Jacobs
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Francois Hoon 30 December 2009

Wow! Amazing poem Marien! ! ! As I said before, you definately have the gift for writing in Afrikaans, so you should keep on doing it, even if you also write more in English. Through this poem you vividly and effectively illustrate the emotions that were felt, and the imagery is really striking! Well done!

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