Friday, November 13, 2015

Ek Aisa Rishta Chahiye Comments

Rating: 5.0

Palkon ka ankhon se hai jaisa,
Dhadkano ka sanso se hai jaisa
Khusbu ka phoolon se hai jaisa
Bus ek aisa rishta ho tera- mera
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M. Asim Nehal
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Souren Mondal 14 November 2015

”Kavi ka pathak ke saath ho jaisa wasia rishta chahiye...” Bohut hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai apne Asimji.. Padke bara anand aaya.. Isse hum saab ke baat ne ke liya sukhriya.10 :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

Needing such a way of love which should be just like a fragrant flower giving essence. Wonderful poem on love is definitely shared in wise mind....10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 November 2015

Nice elaboration of a wonderful relationship. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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