Ek Aarzoo! Comments

bahuth khoob....kia soch hai.....waaah...khoob maza aaya.

Wah wah..Jo bus chalay To tuloo-o-ghuroob ka manzar Falak pe bikhri hui ek daastan ker dun Hawa k dosh pe

very poetic. i enjoyed. beautiful work dear.

'I wandered lonely as a Cloud That floats on high o'er Vales and Hills, ...' a nice wish.

Dukhon ki chhaon mein Taaron ko saibaan kr k Gulon se rang chura k Mein roshnai karun........ shukriya.....10 me dua karu tu sehatmand rahe teri har arzoo puri ho mukam hasil ho..... hasmukh

Hawa k dosh pe Aanchal ko baadbaan ker k Jo bus chalay To mein baadal k naqsh-e-paa pe chalun...

to consolidate the fragmented story of sky.. beautiful write.love your write. bas iske aage bhi kuchh likhne ko dil karta hai.

to consolidate the fragmented story of sky.. beautiful write.love your write. bas iske aage bhi kuchh likhne ko dil karta hai.

What you wish - beautifully put. Thank you.

Wow...Beautiful write Shahzia.....Loved it.