Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Either Way I Lose? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feeling betrayed in the beginning
Revenges crash course starts
A Y in the road is calling
Choose me for quick relief
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Biff McGuire
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Haley Akin 29 June 2011

I like this in the way it is brutally honest. Great expression! Please read a few of my poems and vote/rate them and comment as well please! Thank you in advance! !

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 29 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A daring hope' on page 1. Regards Akmal

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Salt lake City, Utah U.S.A
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