Friday, June 8, 2007

Either Way Comments

Rating: 3.2

Crafted life that's removed from choice.

All choice and spontaneous explosions of
actions well removed from social norms.
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John Kipling Lewis
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K Holoholo 05 November 2007

Don't get it, I need to see it and I don't. No vision to it.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

4. No details, just abstract telliness. Give me examples, images, anything to make it work as a poem.

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Donna Robertson 03 August 2007

Very very good. Life is like that.

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John Kipling Lewis

John Kipling Lewis

Manhattan, KS
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