Friday, April 22, 2016

Eighteen Holes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tee off in grand style on a green
Course and focus on your golf task
Where records tumble in a wondrous win.
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John Sensele
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 April 2016

Subtle game is all you need. Don't embarrass your twin Sister as it's not in your nature in expletives to bask Where records tumble in a wondrous win. To attempt to enter a golf club collarless is a sin Punishable by an eighteen-hole arduous task. Tee off in grand style on a green Where records tumble in a wondrous win. Nice stanzas. I enjoyed reading this poem. 10 for it.

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