Sunday, July 15, 2012

Eight Years Filled An Ocean Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was two days from our first kiss
I could not move from the bed
Staring at the ceiling
Sure that soon I would be dead
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Captain Cur 15 July 2012

Hypnotic dirge beat to this poem. Interpreting challenging, many nuances. Good write.

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