Eight Balloons Comments

An amazing and fun poem cleverly written.

I like this poem

Lovely write in the style of a nursery poem. Quite interesting. Thanks.

A fun poem. I would love to read my grand son.

A beautiful poem. I Didn’t want it to end. It’s exciting to see a floating balloon though often it is celebrating a death but not this time.

Free to fly! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

One thought highways might be fun - POP! One took a nap in a cactus pile - POP! One stayed to play with a careless child - POP! What an imagination. Tony

This has a colorful 'action' feeling to it. He could have gone further with it, but set it at eight- knowing it could go far beyond that. Like a bouquet of balloons and their adventures. Good for a children's' book!

One fell in love with a porcupine - POP! .so impressive. Beautiful poem.

all balloons free to pop!

I have to report this poem to my class

I have to remember this poem and report it to my classmates

I have to report this poem in front of my class

i have to do a solo on this poem for dance