In better times superb Eids, went bye past
Eid now, just that, a passing name
Eids that were delight, in visages lost,
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Nostalgic and wistful write in a dialect vastly spoken in southern and central Punjab. Neat translation has enhanced it's effect and nicely bridged the gap between two quite different languages. Especially the last line is translated beautifully in a metaphor. Kudos!
poignant..............a tinge of sadness or was it nostalgia..............