Thursday, August 1, 2013

Egyptian Gypsy Comments

Rating: 5.0

I met an Egyptian Gypsy by the Dead Sea
She read my palm
Jumped in the sea
Then floated away from me
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R.Benjamin Abate
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Lucifera Santez 06 August 2013

imaginative and beautiful, a great write. please read some of mine. :)

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Danny Draper 06 August 2013

Succinct and sad but hopefully she sailed a happiness sea.

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Dave Walker 01 August 2013

Short and sweet, a great poem.

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R.Benjamin Abate

R.Benjamin Abate

Mattydale, NY
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