Thursday, October 20, 2005

' Egotism ' Comments

Rating: 3.0

I had a date, but in the rain I let her wait.
She was a ravenous beautiful creature,
deserving of me, for I had caught her eye.
The thought of her waiting especially for me
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Gordon Whittaker
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An excellent read and Max's comment was too!

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Max Reif 20 October 2005

I have to say, you tell a story well, and the ego in your story is cut from the cloth of the real thing! Clever ending, too. (he hasn't reformed, really, he just doesn't wanna get his head bashed again.)

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