I had a date, but in the rain I let her wait.
She was a ravenous beautiful creature,
deserving of me, for I had caught her eye.
The thought of her waiting especially for me
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I have to say, you tell a story well, and the ego in your story is cut from the cloth of the real thing! Clever ending, too. (he hasn't reformed, really, he just doesn't wanna get his head bashed again.)
An excellent read and Max's comment was too!