Ego/Soul Comments

Yeah that is true aint it.....how often do we make fools of ourselfs....brillant in how you play on your words...quite re-freshing...loved it.

The soul giggles at the bantering ego. The poem creates a picture using action oriented words(diction) . Excellent.

The smiles of the heavenly soul at the banter of the earthly, proud ego is excellently brought out in this short poem.

Brilliant, truly inspired.