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Ego has to go for sure
From mind and nature
It harms more
Should be shunned therefore
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Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 5 hours ago · Unlike · 1
Sheila Ann Anderson very well said about an hour ago · Unlike · 1
There's some good emotion and a message of honesty in these thoughts that are worthy of verse... David Lekich35 minutes ago But as a poem, it seems to me to lack structure, coherence and, here, rhyme and rhythym. I'd suggest, for what it's worth, focusing on the message you want to convey, and consider whether rhyme is the best vehicle to do so. I think this poem may have more potential if you abandon the rhyme scheme and focus on your theme: let me understand better why ego should be shunned; why ego is contrary to the many things that are of value (honesty; nobility) . Just my opinion- good luck! Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago rhythm is my l ife. poetry may not come easily for me without it..5000 poems same syle n way, apprecaited world wide dear 0
R K Chowdary Jasti Wonderful write with great and essential thoughts! Hasmukh Ji about a minute ago · Unlike · 1
Hasmukh Mehta welcome jairamji n shivani singh a few seconds ago · Unlike
Post Very good thoughts, i love it Dev Parkash Nischal4 minutes ago Very nice flowing worded poem Comment +1 good
tanmay kumar SankhuaLess than a minute ago nice thought Comment +1 nice poem
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