Saturday, November 22, 2014

Ego Comments

Rating: 5.0

I need to lose my ego
It carries me away
To places I don't want to be
And stresses out my day
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Vanessa Hughes
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Payal Priya 08 April 2017

Beautifully written.An insightful look at the damages one's ego does.Thanks for sharing☺

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Greg Davidson 10 September 2016

I love it.. both the meaning and the structure

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Roseann Shawiak 09 September 2015

Perfect diction and rhythm, great poem concerning our egos! They tend to get in the way, trying to outdo others and wrecking havoc in our lives. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 04 September 2015

ego is the force that compels men to wickedness. Nicely penned, Vanessa

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Jak Black 02 August 2015

Simply great. We must learn to be a little more humble. Lovely rhyme and flow. Well done.

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Sekharan Pookkat 14 April 2015

ego- super ego - every body embraced it - Nothing in this world is ours- try to believe it

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Saadat Tahir 07 December 2014

amazing poem...impressive it is so well rhymed...simple and it has a mega message. not many poems i read today have one component right. but, as a non native english speaker i shy at talking too much.. lest i reflect my own ignorance blessings very nice liked

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Vanessa Hughes

Vanessa Hughes

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