Egg and humans have similar traits
How we’re cooked determines our fates
We can be hard boiled, tough as they come
Or softies, welcomed by most everyone
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This is so light and witty. You have done well here to compare mankind to eggs and so appropriately done. Just wondering though, is the first line meant to be 'Eggs and humans have similar traits' instead of 'Egg and humans have similar traits'?
Not sure of the last line though. It seems to read like there is a word missing or something. Anyway, apart from that, I enjoyed the read and the imagery that came forth. Thanks and many blessings to you
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This is so light and witty. You have done well here to compare mankind to eggs and so appropriately done. Just wondering though, is the first line meant to be 'Eggs and humans have similar traits' instead of 'Egg and humans have similar traits'? Not sure of the last line though. It seems to read like there is a word missing or something. Anyway, apart from that, I enjoyed the read and the imagery that came forth. Thanks and many blessings to you