Efforts Poem by Rini Shibu

Efforts

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It is a waste of time
to do the right thing at the wrong time
or at the wrong place
It will be a vain effort
and a big mess
Because the ultimate result
won't be perfect
when done under stress
So avoid doing at the wrong time
And do right at the right time and place

Friday, March 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: wrong vs. right
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dheeraj 16 March 2018

Reality is projected through words. Awesome write.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 December 2022

A sagacious poem. Well put. Appreciated the brilliant comment of dear poetess Nudershada! !

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Valsa George 19 March 2018

A sound advice to be taken into heart for good results........!

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Rini Shibu 19 March 2018

Thanks Mrs.Valsa for your comment..! ! Rini

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Nudershada Cabanes 19 March 2018

Wise words of advice Rini. So true doing the right things at the wrong time and place will not yield good result. Everything should be done rightly at the right time and right place.10 Nuder

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Rini Shibu 19 March 2018

Thanks Nuder for your comment..! ! Rini

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White Tiger 17 March 2018

It makes you think how so many things are done right, but at the wrong time. Interesting write my dear Rini. thank you for sharing.

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Rini shibu 17 March 2018

Thanks, great comment dear poet

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 March 2018

Negative vibrations release negative results. Wrong time is negative. So we have to do right thing in right time. Beautifully penned. Thanks.

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Rini Shibu 17 March 2018

Thanks Kumar..! ! !

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