Saturday, September 2, 2017

Effervescence Of Morning Light Comments

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Bubbles after bubbles are arising,
In fresh stream water in near forest,
Falling clear light these are seen,
Golden pink yellow colours appear.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Efran Menny 03 October 2020

Great poem i like how you describe light starting from bubbles. The reality you have felt well and this creation is wonderful.

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Heather W.B. 03 October 2020

Always you wonder me through your writing skill. Golden light you have analyzed properly. Bubbles of wisdom are favored through our observation. Tender light of sun not only touches us but also gives us his message. You are a messenger of nature to describe it well and motivate readers. All need light of wisdom. Splendid poem!

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Effervescence glows. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 June 2018

Gathering new pieces of emotion, Effervescence of morning light glows, Floating clouds invite birds to play, Flying is important for them of course....What a wonderful poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 October 2017

New pieces of emotion! Thanks for sharing.

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Muzahidul Reza 03 September 2017

It is a great share here to poem hunter, generally every one has Effervescence Of Morning Light but the conscious have much, thanks for sharing,10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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