not a bad little poem, i wanted more of it know it seems you had much to say but limited it to just a few lines.......... maybe in order for the title to hold true 'effective words' you needed to hold back, contain and steer clear of over expressing the thought. nice work although a little short
regards
Vincent
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not a bad little poem, i wanted more of it know it seems you had much to say but limited it to just a few lines.......... maybe in order for the title to hold true 'effective words' you needed to hold back, contain and steer clear of over expressing the thought. nice work although a little short regards Vincent