Eerie Calm Comments

Eerie Calm by Jasmeen Khan is a coherent poem head to toe word by word arranged very calm

styllish vocab- -a good poem! ! !

To look swans, fluttering their wings in water, splashing of water made by swan, intense silence, misty evening...wao am still in imagination, a perfect poem to be read as well enjoyed & read again & again over time

Lovely words and they are put together very interestingly.

this is a piece of wonderful image creation... love it much...

Silence giving way to meaningful sounds and feelings swelling for utterance! Beautiful images Jasmeen! I see a hundred swans splashing, fluttering their wings! !

Many deep and true feeling expressed here. A lovely write Jasmeen.

Feelings grow in... gentle ripples. Thank you for the nice image.