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Horace P. Maggot, of no fixed address,
Para-sailed thru life Criminally Obsessed.
Fast cash? His prize! Trickery? His game!
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Deanna just great, this work has so much tallent in depth and in content and from the pen that wrote it, a sheer work of art cheers Sylvie
So Dee, when you were 11. So you've been at it for some time now aye. This was an awesome poem, I loved the scarey feel of it. And such wit.Well done.Im adding it to my faves.x
WELL CRAFTED WORK...THIS PIECE SHOULD GET LOTS OF HITS
I'm too scared to give it anything other than a 10. You have talent galore. You do the most difficult task in poetry, which is to tell a story in rhyme. I know, because that's what I do.You are brilliant. GW62