Saturday, May 5, 2012

Education Comments

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Wonder who we were going to be me and you…
This education is for me and you
This future is for me and you
My life, my happiness and yours too
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Goodenough Sakhile Dlamini
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Rajkamal P.j 15 September 2012

a good trial..congrats..keep writing..

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shorta again to this one too, its the same mistakes which can be reduced simply.theres a strategical way: after u have completed writting your lirical poems ensure that u go through them in order of corection and spelling erros. by this u wil find it more easire to kop wit the challenges.by der way all the poems i hv read are fantastic mfana(they have a meaning) rise above hate.......

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Goodenough Sakhile Dlamini

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KwaZulu Natal, Pinetown
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