Education Comments

The pain and the ordeal of a seven year old comes alive before the eyes of the reader in its shocking starkness. Very powerful portrayal.

Vivid and haunting. Sounds like true experience, but hopefully was just your great imagination. Well written.

Learning the hard way! With the muse of life. Thanks fo sharing this pem with us.

It's a nice poem. It is difficult to keep our pain and grief bottled up and it does come out eventually.

Even if not true, my heart goes out to the seven year old. very nice.

Struggles and the reality of pain growing teach us life. A kind you do not from school. Great write!

The poem even in its wilderness seems to be nice and the situtations perfectly against the rights of the child which follows it in the life and creating a peculiar personality without compromising the sufferings.