Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Edge Of Love And Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

My head spirals with confessed emotions, clarity was to harsh to me for her not so.
It grows to my Shoulders, chest, stomach, heart, to my dangling legs.
The Sun draws its final breath of the loving world.
Twilight lights up the roof estate and my eyes are drawing down.
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Rather Dead Than Cool
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That was really thoughtful. I like how you described love. Keep writing.

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