Tortured eyes...I can't see
as my soul burns in a flame
of cold misery
darkness in a land
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This poem flows perfectly deep. The truth and pain come rushing out in vivid Colors in this piece. Another power filled and emotional write from you.
Wow, amazing imagery. great poem. i have felt this wave wash over me but thanks to your poem i have seen it and now that i have its number, its days are numbered. thank you
Like lightning thunder rolls across the sky my heart pumps blood so full of anger that runs through my veins. Each of us at one time or other have peeped over the edge of insanity and we can see through your eyes what we felt but were unable to word. Your poems are made powerful and striking by your choice of words which pour out of your soul. Great! Angel
This is such a great play on words! Life is so crazy like that! I love the poem! Thats exactly where I am right now in my life. I love it! Keep writing!
I cannot tell you how much I can relate to this...this is such a great write and would be an awesome song :) 10
....beautifully composed my darling friend..these stanzas are amazing...love this ★