Thursday, June 25, 2009

Eden Redux Comments

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The lifeless ground
raised twigs from dust
like arms in prayer
the Pharoah's obelisk
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Eddie Roa
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Catrina Heart 30 June 2009

Fabulous written poem ED...........you got a golden pen!

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Carol Gall 29 June 2009

sounds absolutely beautiful great poem

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Carl Harris 29 June 2009

This is a very well written and expressed poem, Eddie, and on a very interesting subject. Archeologists would give their right arm to find the site of the original Garden of Eden. Such a find would set Darwin's theory of evolution on it's ear! Great write. Carl.

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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