Eden Redux Poem by Eddie Roa

Eden Redux

Rating: 5.0


The lifeless ground
raised twigs from dust
like arms in prayer
the Pharoah's obelisk
juts out from parched
red Nubian clay
beneath an oppressive
and torrid eastern sun

Is this Osiris' realm?
On crossing the divide
I find myself alone
upon opening my eyes
at the solemn hour
my tremulous lips numbed
No more to kiss, nor to
utter a fervent orison

My eyes wandered
Seeing fabled sights
A Unicorn pranced
around the Tree of Life
The lion and the lamb
cavorting in play
Adam chiding Eve
saving her innocence

Is this Eden now?
Here in the Eastern plains
where the Euphrates flowed
It hasn't changed a bit
Paradise still fittingly called
Even after the deluge
Its beauty preserved
unstained by original sin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 30 June 2009

Fabulous written poem ED...........you got a golden pen!

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Carol Gall 29 June 2009

sounds absolutely beautiful great poem

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Carl Harris 29 June 2009

This is a very well written and expressed poem, Eddie, and on a very interesting subject. Archeologists would give their right arm to find the site of the original Garden of Eden. Such a find would set Darwin's theory of evolution on it's ear! Great write. Carl.

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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