Thursday, May 10, 2018
Eden Comments
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By nightfall did we reach,
And so begin our destination.
As though I would, at least, assume it was a stable course.
Though unsteady was the travel.
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Naila Rais
11 May 2018
A well expressed poem.. I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.... Naila
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7/28/2025 3:39:43 PM # 1.0.0
i like it and i don't like it, but for the most part this was a smooth and 'interesting' write. i had some trouble with interpretation, and i don't like it when i have such 'trouble'! ;) let me look at another of yours. maybe Kingfisher. welcome to PH. bri ;)
Try One Night in June
In retrospect, I have found there is too much weight in this poem. The words are not strong enough to hold what they contain.