'Ed' Ucate Yourself Comments

Yes I agree with Scarborough this would make a good stage performance. Having said that, you paint a rather harsh picture of the uneducated, unfortunately it is also a picture of truth. We can view these people on any given day walking through the downtown streets or the ghetto parts of town. They are there in full view, begging, some too embarrassed to beg. All it takes is education, no procrastination and lots of dedication. A very basic formula, I believe. Wonderful, wonderful poem. Thankyou---Melvina---

I enjoyed this too. Can imagine it being performed on stage. Cheers Gyp's

This is a poem that pulls the scaryness of our life (your life) into a warning of others.. DUH! .. I really like it, it has a 'rocky' feeling. Can't wait to read more of your work. Aeraliece Corby