Ecstasy Comments

very beautiful.the meaning u r trying to transfer is so marvelous.the only thing we try to get is love.the its both side is beauty~nb

Wow marvelous poem on a paradox, nicely rhymd. Pls do coment my latest, a gambling poem.

One part so good, one part foul One part of sea, other of land One part jewel, one part sand Nice lines!

There are major changes, it has a new form and lovely write for sure_Soul

Interesting write, you done well here just i was confused when i saw the word asid in your poem, then i knew that it was typo of said..hahahaha...you doing very nice poetry but be careful dont type so fast it will make some typo..keep it up Mohamad_Soul