Behold the depth of unknown bliss
Awakened by a lover's kiss -
Sweet ecstasy unbound!
So tender, yet so passionate
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Nice Linda loved this one good rhyme schemes and lovely ending very good! ! Séamus
Linda, This one resonates with me. The love is within, but the 'other' enables it to sing! I do admire your use of traditional verse structures and the creative jewels you mine using such discipline. love, Allie XX
Linda, a very passionate and tempting invitation. A soulful write... well done! Brian
LINDA...PASSION AFLOW ME...VERY NICE WORK...CLEAN LINEAGE, SMOOTH FLUX...BEAUTIFUL WRITE! ....AND I KNOW YA DON'T CARE...BUT I'M A TENNIN' YA UP JUS' TH' SAME...FRANK
love do exist by the bliss passion when intense by the mystery the ecstasy seems to flow by the gleams that whispers the language of love...................yet with unique imagery when lucid of unique genere, smooching, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing