Saturday, December 24, 2005

Ecstasy Comments

Rating: 4.4

Behold the depth of unknown bliss
Awakened by a lover's kiss -
Sweet ecstasy unbound!
So tender, yet so passionate
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Linda Ori
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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 April 2008

love do exist by the bliss passion when intense by the mystery the ecstasy seems to flow by the gleams that whispers the language of love...................yet with unique imagery when lucid of unique genere, smooching, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Robert Howard 15 January 2007

Very trim and lyric at the same same. Not a word is wasted.

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Séamus Fox 16 July 2006

Nice Linda loved this one good rhyme schemes and lovely ending very good! ! Séamus

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Alison Cassidy 12 July 2006

Linda, This one resonates with me. The love is within, but the 'other' enables it to sing! I do admire your use of traditional verse structures and the creative jewels you mine using such discipline. love, Allie XX

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Brian Dorn 04 July 2006

Linda, a very passionate and tempting invitation. A soulful write... well done! Brian

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LINDA...PASSION AFLOW ME...VERY NICE WORK...CLEAN LINEAGE, SMOOTH FLUX...BEAUTIFUL WRITE! ....AND I KNOW YA DON'T CARE...BUT I'M A TENNIN' YA UP JUS' TH' SAME...FRANK

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