I adore her lustrous eyes
Those saphire eyes,
Where I see the surge of seas:
The surge of love in bluish colour,
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My heart vibrated upon reading this one. Your love desire has been fully pictured in this poem. She is a beauty and the words in this poem described the love in its splendor...No painting can capture love as you did Vipins. Congrats and continue to move us, to breathe with us and to make us dream with you...Virginia
wow! ! ! ! ! ! what an ecstacy now i forgot my agony! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
wow! ! ! ! ! ! what an ecstacy now i forgot my agony! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
that was beutifull. not too manny outher words to explain it.... amazingingly heart breakingly beutiful... good job
The intensity of love is ecstatically presented.Nice.
that is by far one of the mostly lovely poems i have ever read, you sir have a gift, to make even a hardened heart swoon. thank you so much, for reminding me that men can feel this way about women, about love, and being loved, Blessed Be, stephanie lowe
I really like this a lot because I too love this beautiful thing....some of my poems directly involve ecstasy people just got to figure out which ones, good write, very interesting
I am bewitched by this poem of yours....great piece of work...and the rhyming scheme is intact too...
Bravo! I take my hat off for you, my friend! Beauty and talent clearly radiate through this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! R.D.V. from NYC....
Beautiful expression of poetic feelings Well done, Vipins. Loving eyes have something magic.
Wow... it was beautiful Vipin, I could have never written something so clever and so deep, It has so much meaning to it... I love it :) 10 out of 10 for you sir!
You pictured everything so perfectly, beautifully done Vipins.