Thursday, July 10, 2008

Eco-Friendly Beach Erotics Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little surfer chic
Cleaning out my clock.
Including a schematic,
Of your sensory socks.
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David DeSantis
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Vaughn Bekker 26 May 2010

ha ha, nice poem dude, well written, wild imagination, good one

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Reshma Ramesh 04 September 2008

excellent............read mine when u have the time

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Chuck Audette 17 July 2008

It sounds like the Beach Boys on some serious mind-altering substances. Wonderful! -chuck

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Mark Nwagwu 16 July 2008

ocean of love always powerful

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Original Unknown Girl 15 July 2008

Fun, clever, playful! ! (like the author perchance!) Good write David. HG: -) xx

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 July 2008

An interesting write..........

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David DeSantis

David DeSantis

Utica, NY
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