Tuesday, September 20, 2005

Eclipse Comments

Rating: 5.0

O luv, how foolish I must seem to you
torturing myself over each imagined rebuff
sulking and shutting down
my response to the casual remark
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Gainor Ventresco
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 21 September 2005

Gainor... beautiful and brilliant... I love it... very well done... -Eila

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Uriah Hamilton 20 September 2005

I enjoy love poems in general, and of course the bad relationships of the past live on to hurt us further.

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Gainor Ventresco

Gainor Ventresco

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