Eclipse Of Night And Day Comments

Very interesting poem. Enjoyed reading it.

Good job poet I liked it thanks for the share

A vivid and enchanting poem so skilfully executed. The last stanza to tie into the title is brilliant. 10/10 Karin Anderson

Great poem indeed. Was it a total eclipse?

this is a very good poem.

Great poem! Ya gotta tenner from me here. Have ya ever heard of Bethany Oklahoma? God bless the troubled in life-MJG.

Good work I loved the flow of this poem

it was perfect... i gust loved it 10++++

this is written so well. thanks for sharing

Beautiful flowing imagery, picks you up and swirls you into the world of lovers. Well written.

Britney this is a nice blending of metaphors to make a fine flowing and drifting poem. Regards Mark

the eternal lovers the moon and the sun...lovely picture in this poem

A mistic movement of shade and light that flows into an ocean of beauty.

beautifully knotted poetic skill with nature......fantastic......and hatsup. My child really you have well written.

A spiritual convergence of nature and romance! Excellent composition.

that's called amazing imagery. loved this description excellent work

Excellent write Britney...well written....10+++

i really like this poem. i tend to like the rhyming poems best. in my mind it paints a picture clearer. so in this poem i saw more of the beach and of the horses and of the ocean and even the eclipse. please continue writing romantic poems.