Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Eclipse Of Moths Comments

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Seekers of the light
Charred by the flare of it's aura
Swirling in nocturnal reverie
In ecstatic pursuit of thy prominence
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Aaron Lynn
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Carolanne Reynolds 10 September 2019

Interesting poem; just learned that eclipse is the collective noun for moths - a surprise. Always pleased to learn. btw, however, you may wish to fix the end of the second line. FWIW, [ it's ] is a contraction of [ it is ], and [ its ], the neuter possessive pronoun is what is meant - IOW, belonging to the moth.

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